4 - DO TEENAGERS SPEND TOO MUCH TIME ON SOCIAL NETWORKS?

ESSAY on "Do teenagers spend too much money on social networks?" Do you agree or disagree?


  • Introduction 
  • Advantages
  • Disadvantages
  • Conclusions (opinion)

Nowadays some people believe that teenagers spend too much time on social networks. However, some people think that social media is damaging young people’s lives.

There are many advantages. First(ly), youngsters can talk more freely and they can make free phone calls on social networks. Second(ly), young people can buy online more easily and fast. Last(ly), teenagers can make new friends and find out about new places and cultures.  

Nevertheless, there are many disadvantages. To start with, people talk less face-to-face / there is less face-to-face communication. Moreover, /  In addition to this,  /  Furthermore,  / What’s more, people are becoming unhealthy spending too much time in front of the computer.  Last, but not least, there are people online with not so good intentions. 

To sum up, /  In conclusion, /  To conclude, even though there are people who think that young people ( don’t ) spend too much time on social media today, I think …..
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